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السلام عليكم
أتمنى أن تصححوا أخطائي إن وُجدت وتشاركونا بما استفدتموه من القصة :
A drop of honey fell on the ground. A small ant came and tasted the honey, then tried to go, but the honey tasted like it.
And she decided to add honey to the drop of honey to enjoy it more and more. The ant got into the honey and started enjoying it .. But it was not able to get out of it, its legs were tied and stuck to the ground, and could not move, and remained in this state until it died.
The lesson is that the world is nothing but a big drop of honey! He who was satisfied with sipping a little honey survived, and he who drowned in a sea of her honey would perish.
بالتوفيق للجميع
قصة جميلة فعلا وذات مغزى، كانت أمي دائما تكررها لنا لقد ذكرتني بها
تصحيح بعض الأخطاء
A drop of honey fell down (هنا ادق لكنها fell ليست خطأ)on the ground. A small ant came and tasted it(لا داعي لتكرار كلمة العسل), then she tried to leave (لو استعملت go يجب ان تذكر الوجهة كما ان تغادر هنا أفضل من أن تذهب), but she liked the taste of the honey(الجملة غير صحيحة واعتقد هذا ما تحاولين قوله) .
And she decided (to add honey to the drop المعنى غير واضح لم افهم ماتقصدينه ربما she decided to get more honey or to get inside the honey jar)to enjoy it more and more. The ant got into the honey and started enjoying (اعتقد ان كلمة eating هنا انسب لكن لا يمكنني ان أقول انها خطأ)it .. But it was not able to get out of it, its legs were tied and stuck to the ground, and could not move, and remained in this state until it died
The lesson is that the world is nothing it’s just a big drop of honey! He who was satisfied with sipping a little honey survived, and he who drowned in a sea of its honey would perish
عندما نستعمل who لا نستعمل معها الضمير لأنه تعوضه
اتمنى ان تستفيدي من تصحيحي وأن لا تنزعجي منه ففي بدايتي كانت أخطائي أكثر منك بكثير وكم تمنيت لو أنني وجدت شخصًا ما يصححها لي حينها
السلام عليكم ورحمه الله وبركاته
قصه جميله وفيها عبره رائعه احسنتي استمري يعجبني ما تقدمينه
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Nice story from a fantastic person
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The lesson is He who would try to get many things from life, life do not let them survive
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